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Had this little idea in my head... ran with it.. oh yeah.. its called writing threw a bit of my own local scottish slang terms into it. If anybody has trouble understanding anything the narrator is saying/thinking message me and i'll be happy to translate.
This piece was very therapeutic.
This piece was very therapeutic.
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Obviously a first draft as it contains a myriad of punctuation and capitalization errors. Also I'd pick whether you want to use the colloquialized 'I'. As it stands, you only use it toward the end and without any sort of implied meaning or regularity. I'd like the 'apostle' figure to be a bit more eloquent, especially in his longer passages. Otherwise, it's entertaining enough.